Talk:Case Closed: The Fourteenth Target
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Requested move
edit- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the proposal.Please do not modify it.Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.
The result of the proposal wasmovetoCase Closed: The Time-Bombed Skyscraper,per the discussion below. Per many articles sometimes referred to as "the movie", I have left that out of the title in this case.Dekimasuよ!03:15, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
Detective Conan: The Fourteenth Target→Case Closed the Movie: The Fourteenth Target— According to the precedent inTalk:Case Closed#Requested move,all names in this series should use the English dub version if available. FUNimation has released this movie for a year under the proposed name ([According to the precedent inTalk:Case Closed#Requested move,all names in this series should use the English dub version if available. FUNimation has released this movie for a year under the proposed name (Amazon), hence the precedent should be followed. Amazon ]), hence the precedent should be followed. —SamueldiCurtisidiSalvadori21:52, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
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- Support-- as nom. --SamueldiCurtisidiSalvadori21:56, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
- Support-- as AfC participant, but keep a reidrect so that the originator can find it again!Graeme Bartlett06:17, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
Discussion
edit- Any additional comments:
The whole category uses this naming structure. Have any of the other movies been released in dubbed versions?Dekimasuよ!03:04, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
- Movies 1 (Detective Conan: The Time-Bombed Skyscraper,now on a similar RM request) and 2 (this) are dubbed.--SamueldiCurtisidiSalvadori04:42, 19 November 2007 (UTC)
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the proposal.Please do not modify it.Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.
Plot Section and Copy/edit
editI currently started writing the plot section, but I do need some help on that. So please if anyone is free and has seen the movie, a little help would be nice. I've seen this movie tons of times, but I forget a few things. Also this whole article needs a good Copy-edit. There are many errors (although no ones fault) and many problems. Some parts may even need a re-write entirely. Any help would be nice. Thanks in advance. -Prede(talk)03:15, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
Playing Card Symbols Wiki-Chart
editI created a chart to orginize this data, as it would be confusing in any other way. I need some help filling out this chart though. I have most of it filled in, but there's still some gaps, and probally a mistake or two. Help? Thanks in advance ^.^ -Prede(talk)03:15, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
- Just... be careful with your spelling. Jimmy's girlfriend does not have the last name of Ray.--SamueldiCurtisidiSalvadori15:50, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
Card numbers
editPrede, thanks for your writing a list of how card numbers relate to the characters. However, due to the change of names in the English adaptation, the relationship is different from that in the original. I am adding those Japanese bits. --SamueldiCurtisidiSalvadori02:27, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
- WoW thank you. I was going to suggest we do something like this. When I was looking up some of the connections they seemed different to me, then I relized the japanese ones are different then the english ones. Some of the ones I put up there were acually the japanese versons, not the english ones. Watch out for that. -Prede(talk)02:55, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
- Dealt with. --SamueldiCurtisidiSalvadori03:27, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for doing all that work! I know your very busy, but thanks a million! Nice job, the chart looks great ^.^ -Prede(talk)03:58, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
- The next thing to do, IMO, is shortening the plot section-- it is too long for a synopsis.. I think this is easy to do for you?--SamueldiCurtisidiSalvadori04:52, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
- I didn't finish writing it yet. I was going to finish writing it, then cut it down. Once I finish I will start to shorten it I think. But I wanted to just write everything out first. -Prede(talk)19:23, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
- The next thing to do, IMO, is shortening the plot section-- it is too long for a synopsis.. I think this is easy to do for you?--SamueldiCurtisidiSalvadori04:52, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for doing all that work! I know your very busy, but thanks a million! Nice job, the chart looks great ^.^ -Prede(talk)03:58, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
- Dealt with. --SamueldiCurtisidiSalvadori03:27, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
To Do List
edit- Make all the names consistent to the english dubbed version in the story plot part (and other sections)
- Fix any errors in the plot(grammar/typos, spelling ), format etc.
- Shorten plot, and/or brake it up a bit
- Possibly add a picture to the plot? [important scene(s)]
- Production section possibly?
- A reception section and lots of info
- Add some sources
Just some ideas. No rush. I'll work on this eventually. Most important is fi xing the errors and the names. After that we can take our time. -Prede(talk)03:56, 11 May 2008 (UTC)
Copy Editing
editI copy-edited the plot, though it is not yet complete. I removed the piped links (where 'knife' is linked to 'King(playing card)', etc) since the significance of how the objects are related to the playing cards is explained later. Having the object names linked to the playing cards is confusing this early in the article. I do think the plot needs shortened, but since I haven't actually seen the movie I think it would be best done by someone else. I'd suggest condensing the accounts of the victims. Additionally, the sections 'The Kiss' and 'The Gun Shot' might be unnecessary. They're also a bit confusing. Maybe the relevance to the movie overall should be explained? Let me know what you think. I might go over this again later, if you don't mind. Also copy-edited the chart.ShellyT123(talk)18:44, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
- You should tellUser:Predea bit; he wrote the main bulk of this article and kind of abandoned it.--SamueldiCurtisidiSalvadori21:19, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
- I did say on the talk page to have this copy-edited. Glad someone did. I actually liked the words linking to the playing cards, but what do others think? I'll have to think about the kiss as I forgot all about that.Prede(talk)19:42, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
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Plot Section
editThis article is flagged as "This article's plot summary may be too long or excessively detailed" however I do not think it is too long. This is a film, and a complicated one at that. To cut down the article would do a disservice to the public in my opinion. It should be edited maybe, but not cut down. Thoughts?Prede(talk)14:35, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
Paintings' name
editPlease, can you tell me the name ofthese paintings:0:46:27; 0:51:37. Thank you. --79.54.23.43(talk)08:51, 18 March 2018 (UTC)
Move discussion in progress
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