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A Riveting Medieval Parallel to the Bible Good and evil clash. Leinad and Cedric are determined to not only survive, but claim hope and victory!
In Kingdom's Dawn, Leinad and Tess, along with all the king's people, must escape slavery by the powerful Lord Fairos. Kingdom's Hope finds them free and arriving in the Chessington Valley.
But when they forget the king, will Kergon and the Kessons capture them for good? After many years, Kingdom's Edge finds Cedric living a hopeless life until a stranger appears with powerful words of a new kingdom and a grand army.
Finally, Kingdom's Reign marches you through the danger of earth's last days as the evil dark knight threatens to defeat the prince once and for all.
Swords, knights, and battles define these captivating tales that parallel biblical events from Genesis to Revelation!

160 pages, Paperback

First published January 1, 2001

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Chuck Black

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Chuck Black first wroteKingdom’s Edgeto inspire his children to read the Bible with renewed zeal. This captivating expanded parable led him to write the Old Testament allegories,Kingdom’s Dawn,Kingdom’s Hope,Kingdom’s Call,andKingdom’s Quest.Chuck's currents works include theKnights of Arrethtraeseries,Call to Arms,and his series in progress,Wars of the Realm.

Chuck is a former F-16 fighter pilot and currently works as an engineer for a firm designing plastic consumer products and has coinvented eleven patented construction products now being sold internationally. He has a degree in electrical and electronic engineering and served eight years in the United States Air Force. Chuck and his wife have six children and live in North Dakota.

It is Chuck’s desire to serve the Lord through his work and to inspire people of all ages to study the scriptures in order to discover the hope and love of a truly majestic King and His Son.

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Profile Image for Carina Wood.
8 reviews
August 18, 2013
I am sadly disappointed in this book. I wanted to like it--I really did.

Have you ever heard the term 'show, don't tell'? This is the perfect example of how one shouldn't do it. The whole book 'tells' us the story instead of showing us. For example, at one point Leinad expresses how close he's become to Tess, but there's no example of that. The only few scenes between the two of them before that were when he met her and watched his father interact with her, when he saved her from the cellar, and when they were running from the black locust-like bugs. No closeness, just action and very short dialogue. Pick any spot in the book; it's all like that.

Characters were also lacking. I can't think of one character, Leinad included, that had any depth. They showed no particular interest in anything, they had no conflicts, and they had very little history... These people were supposed to represent characters from the bible, but if someone read this without knowing anything about the bible, how would they glean anything from these characters, or lack thereof?

Not only that, but the 'bad guys' in the book were all bad for no apparent reason. In fact, anyone not serving the King was either bad, a fool or weak. It's kind of a poor look at the world and the people in it. I wouldn't want my child thinking everyone that wasn't a Christian was less than anyone that was.

There are some shining moments, though. It was fun to try and figure out what the analogy was and who people represented. The sword fighting moments were also fun to read. I might also mention that Chuck Black was very good at causing hardships on his main characters. I say this as a good thing. If we know a character is good at something and will likely use it to complete their purpose, it's awesome if the author takes that talent away or rather makes it hard, even impossible for that character to use that talent. It creates good conflict and make the story much more interesting to read. It's sort of like cutting off the trigger finger of a gunslinger.

That brings me to another point. There seems no purpose for why Leinad is suffering. Sure it's analogy to the bible, but those all had some reason to happen. For Leinad, he's just thrown into it with no explanation. Even when he meets up with the King later, no explanation is offered, just a "Don't doubt me". There might be some explanation later in the series, but for now, nada.

This brings me to my last point. There's no story arc at all. The book starts about three chapters in (I mean it. Black could've condensed the first few chapters into a few paragraphs and not lost anything in the telling) and throws Leinad into a mission which he completes (sort of) almost right away. Then he just kind of wanders into bad situations. There's no goal or anything that he's trying to accomplish. And then at the end, there's no big conflict he has to overcome, except maybe that he 'doubted' the King which is loose and a little bit lazy writing. I sure hope the author has put as much thought into the next books as he put into creating the analogy.

Actually, I have one more small point. It is clear to me that Black has never gone hungry or starved. If he had, he would know that not eating after a few days would not make someone so weak that they would collapse. In fact, if one doesn't eat anything by the fifth day (which was referenced by Black) they wouldn't feel bad at all, but even a little good since the body has started eating the stored cells. Now, if he had said more than a week or a couple weeks it would have been more plausible... Oh well, small matter.
Profile Image for Allison Tebo.
Author21 books408 followers
July 15, 2017
This was a very fun read! A clean and Christian alternative to Brian Jacques. I really appreciated how the author was able to write an exciting adventure without getting too dark or violent and I loved the allegories. I wish I had known about these books when I was a tween or young teenager...

Its nice to have a good, Christian fantasy adventure that I can recommend to younger readers without any reservations! These would be great to read aloud.

I will definitely read the rest of the series.
Profile Image for Lovely Day.
847 reviews131 followers
January 31, 2023
4.5⭐️

I didn’t realize that this series came before the Knights of Aerethtrae, or I would’ve read them in order!

I love this world that Chuck Black has written and I’m excited to read the rest of this prequel series!
Profile Image for Parker Hankins.
23 reviews
March 20, 2019
Though this series was written super fast paced, I found it entirely enjoyable. The characters were relatable, and I sympathized with them. This was a wonderful book!!
Profile Image for Anne Hamilton.
Author47 books169 followers
October 20, 2020
I'm not a big fan of allegory.

While I admire what Chuck Black has done with this story, it suffers from the usual problems of the genre: characters subordinate to a plot, thin and not quite credible motivations, a storyline that 'just happens' rather than is deftly patterned and cohesive. It's a straight string, rather than a woven tapestry.

Leinad is a farmboy whose father has trained him with the sword. He wonders why. He starts out as symbolic of 'Seth', morphs into 'Noah' then 'Joseph' and then 'Moses'.

Sure there were some great scenes - daring rescues and ferocious swordfights - but at the end of it all, I was left wondering why. Sure some scenes were more dramatic than Scripture, but many were stripped of their richness and texture.

A straightforward fantasy, loosely based on Genesis, might have worked far more satisfactorily in terms of story structure. At least it would have for me. However, if you are a fan of allegories likePilgrim's Progress,don't let my quibbles put you off. This is an ideal start - especially for kids.
Profile Image for Katie.
Author2 books127 followers
November 19, 2011
Once again I was lost into this medieval retelling of the first few books of the Bible. I love how Chuck Black uses different things, events, and creatures to represent the happenings in the Bible.

The action doesn't stop! Lienad seems to barely escape one thing, when he is then faced with an even bigger problem. Tess makes a fun sidekick and I loved watching her grow alongside her protector, Lienad. These two did not have an easy path, yet they stayed strong to the King. The King that they'd yet to see.

I highly recommend this for readers, old and young alike. If your sibling or child can read...they should read this book! It's a bit violent in places (not overtly, but Lienad is in many fights, gets whipped, etc), but I didn't think it was ever too much for a young teen.
Profile Image for Kaytlin Phillips.
Author12 books189 followers
January 31, 2024
I love this series! Always have!

Characters:
Leinad is the main character, and he tries so hard to trust the King and do the right thing, but it's hard, and I love watching him grow through the struggles he faces.
Tess is a little ray of Sunshine, and I love her feisty spirit!
All the other characters pass in and out of the story as Leinad and Tess travel and struggle to survive, but they are all well done and throughly enjoyable!

Themes:
Of trusting in God even when it seems He isn't there.
This book is a loose allegory to the Bible, so this builds on a lot of Old Testament events, replacing them with some fantasy elements, but still staying close to the original storyline. I really enjoy it!

Romance:
N/A

Langauge:
N/A

Overall:
I love this series and the overarching story. Leinad is such a great character! And just... yeah, this who series is awesome! They also move at a nice pace and are short, making them great books for boys of impatient readers.😁
Profile Image for Mike (the Paladin).
3,147 reviews1,947 followers
September 7, 2013
Again I'm a little torn on the rating here. I like the idea of this book, the set up and the plot. Sadly as is often the case with Christian fiction, the book itself...as a story/novel is a little weak.

We get a feel for the characters in the book, but they never get filled out. The book reads a bit more like an extended outline than a finished novel.

We follow the young protagonist as he faces loss, learns lessons, grows up. He meets and cares for someone. He accepts responsibility and he finds who his true enemies really are.



This is a good story and it's an idea I like. I don't know if I'll follow it up. I hope that as he writes the author will be able to tell a fuller and satisfying tale.

3 stars and not a bad read.
Profile Image for Lou Allen.
250 reviews151 followers
September 25, 2019
3.5/5 stars. An interesting read.
Although it is listed on the back as Teen Fiction, it is really more like the allegorical novel Pilgrim’s Progress than a modern YA fantasy.
Kingdom’s Dawn is an allegory/fantasy retelling of the beginning of the Bible from Genesis up to the start of Exodus. It is a traditional medieval fantasy following Leinad a farm boy who is chosen to serve the King. He trains in sword fighting and is sent out with the task of saving his people from oncoming danger, but things don’t go exactly as he would like.
I liked the concept of retelling so many different biblical stories in one narrative. Chuck Black manages to weave the different pieces together to form one person’s storyline.
I enjoyed the fight scenes and the action sequences which had suspense. However the dialogue often felt awkward.
The book is very short and so not surprisingly there isn’t much time for character development or world building.


Profile Image for Hannah Rodes.
111 reviews12 followers
November 28, 2015
This book should have been read in a day, but I put it off because it was such a thin book. I wasn't to enthused about reading it, but I picked it up it was a really interesting book! but one thing I didn't like was that it kinda to packed in to tight like it told sort of Adam and Eve then about Noah and then Joseph and I think them they started Moses. but over all it was an very interesting book I would recommend it to anyone who likes these types of books:)
Profile Image for Sisters Three.
108 reviews97 followers
January 31, 2024
This book keeps you on the edge of your seat...once one thing is passed it's not long before another event hits, poor Leinad....we love Tess and Leinad and the whole story is just great! Love these books!!!
Profile Image for Sierra Elliott.
Author2 books63 followers
November 1, 2023
I know this was a middle/children's book but oh it left me wanting more!! I mean that in a good way... if this was a YA novel and it could be expanded, it would do really well.
Profile Image for Isaiah Harris.
36 reviews
April 17, 2022
Here is a book I decided to revisit after finding out a younger guy at my church started reading the series.

Having a well-grounded understanding of the Old Testament makes this story incredibly interesting, allegorizing several OT characters and patriarchs. Though reading allegory can sometimes feel like an uncomfortable middle-ground between fiction and truth, there is enough in this book to satisfy the longing for a good story as well as to remind the reader of biblical truth.
Profile Image for Hannah Joy.
250 reviews
June 25, 2020
From the first few paragraphs I was hooked!

I love allegorical fiction like this when it relates to the Bible.
After the first few chapters everything clicked into place and I could see what parts of the Bible Chuck Black was recreating in his fictional setting of Arrethtrae (I love this name & all of the creative names of people and places in this book!).

This first book in the Kingdom series retells the Creation and the bondage of the people chosen by God in an allegory.

The ending gave me chills and tears came to my eyes more than once!
I can’t wait to continue the series and see where Chuck Black takes the characters!

Profile Image for Blabby Gabi.
38 reviews2 followers
November 23, 2017
I️ love this book!!!!! It is sooo good! I️ can’t wait to read the next book in the series:) I️ even got my dad to read it! Now he cant wait for the next book either 😂 A medieval allegorical twist of the Bible... I️ love this time period!!!!!
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Profile Image for Haley S.
385 reviews
November 4, 2015
This book wasn't my favorite. I don't know why exactly. But I think the story her was living was too close to the Bible stories. Just not my taste. But I will probably finish the series.
Profile Image for A.R. Thompson.
134 reviews
March 30, 2019
Here's a good question: What does swordfighting have to do with farming?

That's the question Leinad has been asking himself for the past four years, ever since his father Peyton began training him in the ancient art of swordsmanship. Leinad's skill grows every day and his life is good, but that one question he can't find an answer to is about to change his life.

Thrust into a mission to vanquish the Dark Knight and his Shadow Warriors before they can desolate the land of Arrethtrae and completely turn its inhabitants away from the One and Only King, Leinad and a young slave girl named Tess must journey through allegorical Biblical events, searching for a way to serve the King while navigating the events of slavery, betrayal, and an unknown brother.

This book was very good with his allegories! Most of the names and places corresponded directly to a Biblical figure or place. For example: Lord Fairos, ruler of the land of Pyran Mid. Who does that sound like? Other characters such as Gabrik, Zane, and Tess all represented a person, or people, recorded in the Bible. At times it was a bit confusing because the main character, Leinad, kept switching which Biblical character he was supposed to represent. Other than that though, it was a good read. I am looking forward to the next book!

"I have prepared you for a greater purpose... stay true to the King. Discover the promise and... beware... of... your brother!"

Tolle et lege.
Profile Image for Kelly.
Author1 book16 followers
June 11, 2018
After attending our local homeschool convention and meeting author, Chuck Black, I decided to read the books our youngest son loves, and it all begins with Kingdom's Dawn. This is a series of books written for elementary and middle grade readers, but after reading the first book of "The Kingdom Series", I have to say that I am hooked and looking forward to reading the rest of the books in the series.

Kingdom's Dawn is very well written and it is a Fantasy story with knights, the world of Arrethtrae, and unusual creatures. The story included plenty of action and adventure, conflicts and battles. I came to love the characters quickly and my interest was held throughout the entire book. I forgot I was reading an elementary/middle grade book and just got caught up in the story.

In addition to being a great Fantasy story, I love the fact that it's also an allegorical story that, as a Christian, pointed me to many of the truths of the Bible. However, if you aren't a Christian or you don't like to read Christian books, those things may not be evident to you, and the book is not preachy in any way. Therefore I believe these books would appeal to all Fantasy readers, most especially to those Fantasy readers who enjoy tales of knights, castles, and kingdoms.

I look forward to reading the next book in the series and following Leinad's journey, with the hope of meeting Cedric, who tells Leinad's tale, in a future book. Also, these books do not take long to read. I finished this first book in about six hours and our son, who is a middle grade student but reads above his grade level, finished each of these books in about a week (that's reading about two hours a day).

So if you're looking for a good summer read for your children, I highly recommend this book. Our son recommends all of Chuck Black's books to ALL of his friends!

Profile Image for Abigail Westbrook.
324 reviews25 followers
January 6, 2024
I read this at the insistence of my 11yo who says this is possibly the best book series he has ever read (he devoured the whole set in about a day). It is not high, classic literature - there is very little character development and not much in the way of description of any kind. It’s all pretty much just bare bones action, one thing after another. But that is clearly not problematic for the target demographic, and I do appreciate the author’s goal of encompassing the large arc of God’s working with His people over the centuries. It’s an infinitely better choice than much of the YA literature out there currently and I’m glad we have this series on our shelves.
Profile Image for Leah Delcamp.
69 reviews6 followers
June 28, 2024
This book incorporates old testament themes into a medieval tale. While I did like the Biblical thread throughout the story, the flow seemed a bit off. I can see middle grade readers really enjoying this, but for me, it was just okay.
Profile Image for Sarah Monzon.
Author23 books533 followers
June 25, 2024
Listened to this on a road trip with my 12 year old. We had fun pointing out the parallel Bible stories. He really enjoyed the book.
Profile Image for Bethany.
218 reviews46 followers
November 27, 2012
Kingdom's Dawn is the first of six books in the Kingdom Series by Chuck Black. The books are basically an allegory of the events found in the Bible, which is my favorite part about the books. Each book represents a portion of Biblical events. This book has characters that symbolize Adam and Eve, and their 3 sons, and The Lord and Satan.

Kingdom Dawn's main character is Leinad {which is Daniel spelled backwards is you look at it closely. He later represents Daniel, in another book in the series} and he is a farmers son. His father daily trains him in the skill of swords and before he knows it, he is a very gifted swordsman; which comes in handy later on in the book when he is in many places where his skill saved his life. But he wonders why his father isn't teaching him his trade of farming because sword fighting has nothing to do with farming. But then his father reveals his past to Leinad and shares how he once let the King {Jesus} down and is training Leinad to make things wright where he failed the King. {Symbolizing Adam and Eve's fall which is found in Genesis} Leinad realizes just how important this role is once his father is tragically killed by Lucas' army {Symbolizing Satan-or the Dark side} and begins serving as a Knight of the King against the Dark Knight Lucias and his army.

I was very pleased with this book and eagerly continued the series at my first chance after finishing Kingdom's Dawn. The only part that might be a con to some is that their are a lot of battle scenes where men fight to the death and kill each other-some portions were a bit descriptive. But other than this, I loved the book.

For sure my favorite character is Tess who Leinad finds on the streets at the beginning of the book. He takes her in and she soon becomes an invaluable friend after his father's death. Overall I loved this book and would definitely recommend it to Christians. If you like Pilgrims Progress they you will most likely like this modern version, which is very similar to Pilgrims Progress. Even though it's considered teen fiction, I enjoyed it a lot. The books are fairly short {Each book is on average 140-ish pages so I was able to read one a day} so I originally thought they might be for younger kids, but I loved them and think adults would enjoy the series as well.
Profile Image for ~Evie's OBSESSED~.
270 reviews161 followers
November 27, 2020
4.8
I loved this book, I just wish it was a little more descriptive. But it was still great. An inspiring fantasy for christians on their own journey with God.

OVERVIEW
"A Riveting Medieval Parallel to the Bible Good and evil clash. Leinad and Cedric are determined to not only survive, but claim hope and victory!
In Kingdom's Dawn, Leinad and Tess, along with all the king's people, must escape slavery by the powerful Lord Fairos. Kingdom's Hope finds them free and arriving in the Chessington Valley.
But when they forget the king, will Kergon and the Kessons capture them for good? After many years, Kingdom's Edge finds Cedric living a hopeless life until a stranger appears with powerful words of a new kingdom and a grand army. Finally, Kingdom's Reign marches you through the danger of earth's last days as the evil dark knight threatens to defeat the prince once and for all. Swords, knights, and battles define these captivating tales that parallel biblical events from Genesis to Revelation! "

POSITIVE ELEMENTS
Full to bursting with positive role models. Leinad and his father specifically are very devoted to the King (God) and his kingdom. Leinad's father takes in a girl named Tess, saving her from a life of service.

VIOLENCE
A man is stabbed and killed. Mentions of blood and death. Mentions of pain and swelling. At one point Leinad and Tess become slaves. Leidad is whipped quite severely

SPIRITUAL ELEMENTS
The King represents God and the Prince, Jesus. Lots of biblical character parallels.

SEXUAL CONTENT
Not present

LANGUAGE
Not present

OTHER NOTES
There is a war between the Dark Knights (Lucius and his followers) and the King and his Silent Warriors (God and his angels).

Absolutely love this book and am looking forward to reading the rest of the series.
Profile Image for Andye.Reads.
891 reviews671 followers
March 3, 2024
I read this book after it was recommended to me by a friend. I thought it'd just be another short read that I'd forget about quickly. Kingdom's Dawn is pretty much the bible in medieval times. And it's friggen' awesome. Honestly, I expected it to be a little cheesy. But, from start to finish the book is pure action. I was more then a little surprised at how much I liked it and very disappointed that I hadn't thought to get the second one at the library at the same time I got the first one. The main character, Lianad, plays the roles of multiple people in the bible. Abel, Noah, Moses, and many others. Chuck Black does a very good job of converting events in the bible into a more fantasy aspect while not completely taking the story of the bible out of it.

Chuck Black has a great writing style that he puts to great use in this book. The story was great. He did a great job of introducing and maturing (for lack of a better term) characters. For a third-person book he really explained their personalities well. You got to know the characters well even in the shortness of the book.

This is a great first part to the series. An easy read that is very epic. A lot of authors need 500 some-odd pages to achieve this. Not Chuck Black. This was pure awesomeness.

Austin
Profile Image for Nan Merrow.
63 reviews4 followers
January 22, 2013
I'd call Kingdom's Dawn "barely ok". If not for my kids getting into it, I would have abandoned it. And I read and enjoy a lot of "juvenile literature." Our kids found the first twenty pages very dull, as the author described characters' physical attributes in great detail. The action quickly picked up, but the story was choppy and shifted gears too quickly. Excessive use of the word "penetrating" was annoying at best, disturbing at worst. It often seemed as if the author was trying to get as many big words in the book as possible. I wanted to like it but just couldn't. If the kids want to read the rest of the series, they are on their own with my blessings. My word to Christian parents: a book doesn't have to be a biblical allegory to be of value to the Christian. There are amazing books out there that have the thread of redemption running through that are much more enjoyable to read.
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