Cindi's Reviews> A Fun Visit to the Barber

2.5 stars, rounded up.

This is GFY. One of the characters anyway.

A straight guy goes in for a haircut thinking his regular (older) barber would be there to do the cut. He's surprised when he sees a much younger man in his place. It turns out that the younger man is the barber's son and is filling in for the day. What starts as a simple haircut quickly escalates to a bit of touching and playing around before they take it back to the straight guy's place and get to know each other a bit better.;)

I like the idea behind the story and it was actually pretty sexy as the two men danced around each other in regards to their attraction. I'm not a big fan of GFY stories, so it wasn't really realistic so don't go into it expecting it to be.

I did have some issues -

- It's in serious need of a proofreader.
- There's major overuse of exclamation points and the character's names.
- It stops at 83%. While I get pushing your other stories, I would've liked to have seen a bit more of these guys.

Overall, a nice enough story. It does have a bit of romance on top of the other stuff.